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Writing Couri Vine

So, Leah and I decided to write a comic book! Wow! GREAT!! Wait a minute. That means…I actually have to write a comic book?! I wasn’t quite sure how I was going to pull this off, so I decided I better school myself in comic book writing. Lucky for me, homework included trips to MidTown Comics, tickets to NY Comic Con, and loads and loads of comic book reading. I also picked up some books on the subject, including Scott McCloud’s “Understanding Comics” and Dennis O’Neill’s “The DC Comics Guide to Writing Comics.”

All the while, story ideas for Couri Vine were brewing. I still didn’t quite know where to start, so I set out to create a Story Bible, an only-for-our-eyes description of the world of Couri Vine. Through that process I found the one question with the potential to define every aspect of this story: How on Earth did they end up on the moon?

The answer to that question is contained in a long history of the future: devastation of the planet, a war on Earth, foul play in the universe, and eventually an Air Plague (with a mysterious cause) that forces the inhabitants of Earth to migrate to the Moon.

Cover Page: Couri Vine

The rewrites…oh, the rewrites…

Our Story Bible is sitting in the Dropbox folder that Leah and I share. What’s exciting to me is that this first story arc (the first four books) is just scratching the surface. Couri won’t even discover her powers until the final pages of the last book. Then, all kinds of new trouble is waiting for her. (insert sinister laugh here)

When it came time to write the script for Book One, I wish I could say that the story just poured out of me. But that’s not the way it happened. I made a lot of mistakes and had to reimagine the story once I actually started typing words. This is the guts of what I learned: writing a comic book is hard. It’s like a puzzle – you think you have this great story that practically tells itself, but then you find yourself counting the number of panels per page and trying to fit in the conflict before the page turns.

Then there are the speech balloons. I had way too many words in my early drafts so I spent a lot of time cutting dialogue and simplifying the story. As I’m writing books 2, 3 and 4, I’m getting better about this. But no regrets – the process has been awesome and I’m loving every minute of it. I guess the best way to write a comic book is just to write a comic book. And then rewrite it. And rewrite it again. And again. And again. And…you get the idea.

Captain’s Blog

Greetings Earthlings, it is I, Leah Lovise! I’m the artist and co-creator of COURI VINE, an all-new comic book about a girl who discovers that her greatest weakness is actually her greatest strength (and ultimately, her super power)!

The idea for a sci-fi tale set in a future world had been bubbling around in my brain for some time. I didn’t know exactly how it would take shape. It all started with a conversation with Jason Stout of the Austin Chronicle, “Let’s make children’s entertainment!” Shortly after that, we developed a world, concept art, and a character bible. The question remained, what is this going to be? I had some ideas. I knew that I wanted to be a part of a project about overcoming obstacles and sustainable living in an otherwise unsustainable setting.

We were so excited when the Austin Film Society awarded us a grant from the Texas Filmmakers Production Fund. This money went toward further development, production of a trailer, and a trip to New York to pitch at the Kidscreen Summit, one of the nation’s largest children’s entertainment conferences. After several months of helping me develop the concept, Jason became super busy making the Austin Chronicle as awesome as it is, and could no longer work on the project with me. I tried roping in other creatives, but was unsuccessful. Here, I was prepping my Kidscreen pitch and was not sure what direction to take. I knew one thing: I needed a writer!

Enter… writer, Vanessa Shealy!

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That’s me – I’m Vanessa. Welcome to our blog!

Back when Leah came up to NYC for Kidscreen, she crashed on my lumpy, too-short sofa, and asked me if I’d be interested in writing a few TV scripts around her concept. She wasn’t really sure how the episodes would work, or really where her idea was headed. So, naturally, I was totally on board! Sometimes you don’t have to know where you’re going, but if you like the person that you’re headed there with, eventually you’ll get there. Plus, Leah’s concept totally jazzed me. I mean, who doesn’t want to write about a civilization on the moon?

So we had many, many (many!) conversations. The more we talked the more the concept morphed into a longer, darker, more involved story. That meant a slightly older audience and a different genre. Most importantly, we moved away from a young boy protagonist and instead decided to rethink one of the peripheral characters as protagonist – the “Furrier Courier”, who became not a Courier at all, but a girl with powers she doesn’t even realize yet. We later shortened her name to just “Couri”, and gave her grandfather the clever name given to Leah’s original hero, Doo Dad.

Finally about a year later, we realized what we’re really talking about here is a COMIC BOOK. We shuddered. Neither one of us had ever dared to venture into the overwhelming realm of comic creation. But if you know me and Leah – you know that’s never stopped us before.

Thus began our work on COURI VINE… more about the method to that madness in our post next week.

Girl. Nerd. Superhero.

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This action-packed, middle-grade science-fiction graphic novel, is now available as a four-part comic book series.

Young People for the Leader Couri Vine Book 1

Book 1: Young People for the Leader

The toxic atmosphere on Earth forced humanity to migrate to the Moon back in 2325. There, a Moon Leader rules with the dream of a lunar utopia and a mission to erase all memory of life on Earth. For an 11-year-old girl named Couri Vine, life on the moon is no utopia. 

When her grandfather gets taken prisoner, Couri resolves to rescue him. What she discovers is that she alone has the power to uncover the truth of what happened on Earth, and what happened to her.   Read it HERE for free!

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Couri Vine Book 2

Book 2: Journey to the Planet Earth

Couri Vine was born with a deadly lung defect and has to wear an embarrassing helmet just so she can breathe. But when you live in a city on the moon, maybe that helmet isn’t such a bad thing after all.

When her grandfather is taken prisoner by Moon Leader Todal, Couri embarks upon a journey to the planet Earth to find his old InData device, which she hopes will help her find him. But along the way she discovers more of her grandfather’s secrets, and learns that he may not be the kind of person she thought he was after all.

Available at Paste Magazine

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Book 3: Hostages

Couri Vine has a debilitating lung defect and has to wear an embarrassing life-support helmet so that she can breathe. But when she makes a trip back to the planet Earth, this 11-year-old adventurer finds herself in some deep water. Maybe her helmet isn’t such a bad thing after all!

Couri returns home to Moon City and her quest for answers about the past leads her to the forbidden Near Side of the Moon, and to Moon Leader Todal’s evil plan.

Available at Paste Magazine

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Book 4: Sacrifice

Held hostage in a high-tech labyrinth on the Near Side of the Moon, eleven-year-old Couri Vine and her best friend Wryon race to free Couri’s shattered grandfather. Together they must devise a plan to save Earth before their menacing ruler, Moon Leader Todal, obliterates the forgotten planet forever. 

In this action-packed final chapter, Couri discovers the dark truths that keep her confined inside a hideous life support helmet. What else must she sacrifice to defeat the evil Moon Leader once and for all?

Available at Paste Magazine

Coming soon to ComiXology

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